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Green Bird
15 July 2008 @ 08:54 pm
Piper  
Reposted to LJ because FP ate my formatting, and this is one of my better one-shots. Approximately 5300 words. Font size is a bit odd, but it won't bite.

Story! )
 
 
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Green Bird
23 June 2007 @ 12:07 am
Contemplating Tawnry's world once more ...  
I realized that the primary social focus in Telwahr is blood family. Kin can pretty much expect to walk into any house owned by their family and be fed and housed, so long as they contribute back to the family afterward. The richer families wear earrings set with certain stones to deliniate their alliances--the ruling family, the Aberaeds, have diamonds are their familial stone. A previous version of the story involved the Aberaed changing Tawnry's family stone to a black diamond simply because by the end of that story the fates of the Aberaeds and Saberahsts had become so tightly linked that they might as well be the same family. Children are raised together, houses are designed to house dozens, there are elaborate rituals for bringing an infant into the family, for adopting a girl, for "removing" a girl from the family so that she can be adopted by another... it's about family.

Which made me realize: Why, then, did I need to have marriage rituals? It seems to be expected that any family-oriented society will be either monogamous or, if polygamous, only the patriarch of the family will have multiple partners. Either way, they're married. But fatherhood doesn't seem to be much of a big deal in Telwahr--it's the mother and her blood kin who raise the child. Sure, a kid would want to know who her father was so that she didn't get involved with someone too closely related, but otherwise? Not very important. The role played by marriages in Earthen cultures--alliances, trade, and so on--are filled by switching children through adoptions.

So... marriage doesn't seem to have much of a place in Telwahr. Shouldn't impact the plot too much, but it's worth thinking about.
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Green Bird
07 June 2007 @ 03:29 pm
*ahem*  

On a happy note, my book on Mayan hieroglyphs and culture came today! Huzzah!
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Green Bird
25 May 2007 @ 10:29 pm
 
Returned my textbooks and copy of Accidental Death of an Anarchist today. Sadly, I still haven't been able to find a reasonably priced copy of ADA of my own, so it looks like I'll be borrowing it from the library if I wish to reread it.

I've got the notes for the first section of At World's End all done up. Now I just need to find a different working title for it, as everybody who hears it mentioned assumes I'm refering to the third Pirates movie, and get past the first chapter, which I keep scrapping. First section is about Ebrelle and company in the still nameless takdom, where they are hired to help establish a colony at (where else?) World's End, which is shamelessly based off of Point Pelee, which is, in my most humble opinion, a brilliant place. Here is an aerial picture. The first part will most likely be the shortest, as I'd like to get them moving out of Rotevogel as soon as possible.

Today I pondered brains, thanks to [info]limyaael's latest essay. The dreamers and dreamwalkers in my Wild stories share a common idea of a dreamworld, and of their souls, but I haven't really talked about the way other people consider their brains to be segmented. A nest-web shaped idea of the brain would be interesting; simpler brains would have fewer threads, making it harder for it to tangle together and for an intruder to go unnoticed. And there could be some threads that are simply superficial, and some that go straight to the centre, although those would probably have some sort of defenses, so that only the right kind of thought/presence could travel along them. Which brings up the question of how they think of thoughts...

I probably wouldn't have done much but try to think of reasons for this idea of how the brain works if it weren't for m'boyo. Instead, we engaged in stimulating repartee. Actually, it was more along the lines of discussing both pizza and [info]kippurbird's Meat/Eragon fics at the same time, which, though highly amusing, is not recommanded for those attempting to behave maturely. Also, a brief summarization of Jean Auel's series, specifically the fourth book, that having been condensed to "sexsexanimalsexsex". (One must be fair, however, and admit that one does enjoy the research that she puts into the other parts of the series, without which one would have chucked the book into a bonfire.) If you do wish to read the series, I'd advice skipping the sex scenes. I swear, you could chop off a quarter of the books if you pitched the sex. You could drop an entire book if you dropped the angst, too.

On the note of sex, I'm contemplating making Ebrelle, the lead of AWE, asexual. Given his upbringing, I think that sexual orientation would actually be encouraged, and I think it could be interesting to play around with. [Insert "playing around with" joke as necessary.]
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Green Bird
16 April 2007 @ 10:10 am
Ebrelle and Kernai (snippet)  
The first thing Ebrelle noticed--

Well, that wasn't true. The first things Ebrelle noticed were that there was a third person in the room, that she was mumbling to herself, and that the er-Tak didn't seem at all disturbed by this.

What he remembered noticing first, later, was that she looked very much like a coyote that had just gotten into a chicken coop, from the feathers clinging to her hair and clothing, to the blood on her face, to her sharp smile.

"This is Kernai," Torgeh said, not looking up from the map. "She's a Dreamer. I'm sure you've met them before."

"A Dreamer?"

Her grin widened and she reached up to tug his hair. "Yes. I'm mad, you know. But I could find you a Dream, if you like."

His interest lost--World's End was a far more interesting prospect than another mad Dreamer--he shrugged and returned to studying the map. "How will I die?"

For a long moment, Kernai was silent, and he almost wondered if she'd left. But then she said, in a voice without anything about it to suggest prophecy, or magic, or anything at all out of the ordinary, "By a snake. Or not. By a diranelle. Or not. By a friend. Or not."

"Thank you, Kernai," Torgeh said, amusement evident. "Why don't you go clean up?"

But the Dreamer simply stared at Ebrelle for a moment, as though a coyote pondering a tricky lock, before adding, "Have this."

"It's a feather." A nice one, admittedly, but still...

"Yes."

And with that, she left, rambling on in a mumbling monotone.
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Green Bird
07 April 2007 @ 02:22 am
Dust and Summer  
So, finished the first segment. From the looks of it, its going to be a rather episodic little tale...

 
 
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Green Bird
06 April 2007 @ 02:16 pm
Day Plan  

1) Type up the Chem labs and send 'em over to the partners. Revise. Print off.
2) Finish the first three thousand words of Dust and Summer, an extended faerie-tale, post.
3) Work on The Children of the Wilds.
4) Do appropriately Good Friday-ish things with the family.

... S'gonna be a long day...

Axel Higgs, Airman Third Class, makes me laugh. How anyone could be so calm in that situation is beyond me.

Update: 10 pm. Not quite what I was hoping for... Oh well.

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Green Bird
30 March 2007 @ 04:35 pm
 
Yay! Challenge complete! Posted on the FP page; link later tonight. I've got a ride to catch now.
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Green Bird
20 March 2007 @ 01:06 pm
OF_Ficathon Challenge, part the first.  
Challenge: Humor/Supernatural with ghosts, witches and an unexpected plot.

... Purple things, I hate writing humor. So, more supernatural, although given the quotes there are--hopefully--a few amusing parts.

Oh, and the three quotes: "Do the inchworm!", "Let's make like babies and head out!" and "I was held back in kindergarten for refusing to share."

... Meh.

Anyway: Story.


So, first segment. Greatly inspired by [info]l_clausewitz's comment about the HP bank; I wondered what would happen if someone
specified that a certain part of the family fortune was not to be inherited until an arbitrary age was met. Say, eighty?

(Not quite sure about the German dates. If anyone knows that it should be reversed, please let me know.
 
 
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Green Bird
16 March 2007 @ 11:17 am
Erm... oops?  
So, today I got a little message from the OF_Ficathon, reminding me that I needed to finish my challenge for the 31st. So, that seemed about right, and I couldn't remember why I hadn't posted the story I'd written for it in the first place. Because I couldn't remember the perameters, and really, looking through my notebooks can be a lot  more work than it's worth if I can't even remember a title, I went to find my challenge.

Turns out I'd written for the next one down on the list.

Oooh... Not good. I remember choosing one that no one else had so that everything balanced out nicely, but I missed the bit about it being humor, I guess, because ordinarily I'd never choose anything where the phrase "Do the inchworm" or the word "Kindergarten" was involved for a fantasy.

Anyways, I finally decided to do something fantasy-school related, seeing as I seem to keep running across them. Parody, most likely. Probably involving that plotbunny I had a while ago where one goddess was trying to write a story and the other kept having the logical thing happen instead. Could be fun, and since I could write it in segments, it would be very easy to get it to the 3000 word mark.

So, what did we learn? Besides the fact that I'm as forgetful as anything? Not much, except that I should probably print out the challenge next time around. And then staple it to my forehead.

On a happier note, I now have a jacket. It is black and supposedly canvas (although much nicer than the canvas I saw on tents, which makes me wonder if this really is canvas), and does marvellous things for my mood. Also, it makes me wish I had a fedora. I never seem to have the right kind of hat.
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Green Bird
23 February 2007 @ 07:59 pm
Slogging through the week  
Long week. Assignments handed in, tests written, news received. My Philosophy/English teacher's wife passed away over the weekend--didn't go to either wake or funeral, but apparently there were far more teens than anyone expected to be there. Poor guy. He deserved much better.

I've gotten out of the habit of writing more than scribbles, much to my irritation. In grades nine and ten I managed to pull off a chapter a week for two stories, with the occasional short story. And really, it's not the workload, its the mindset. So. Found my notes for a story that interests me; another Wild one called At World's End (although the title of the next Pirates of the Carribean is similar, so I might end up changing it). I figure I can get a rough outline done by March break and at least the first three of the rough done over the break. Then, say, a chapter a week after that until May, which is exam month. Free after that, so at least two chapters a week until September, when I'm back to a chapter a week. Hm. Or perhaps a numeric goal would be easier to keep track of, and more productive.

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Green Bird
12 February 2007 @ 08:12 am
 
An unexpected six thousand words done on Soulan on Saturday. Worked on biochem the rest of the time, but damn. I think that more than makes up for it. Of course, it helps that Lord Forla waltzed in to replace maj Pelst.

Someone stole my lock a week ago, so I went and replaced it. Apparently I owed the office eight dollars for this, which seems unfair, considering I'm not the one who got rid of the lock in the first place.

In any case, the first two thousand or so words of Soulan's story:




Probably should have been more negotiations, but Soulan's not really in a position to do much. Hm... Anyways, once I get the third part done I'll post the second.
 
 
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Green Bird
02 February 2007 @ 05:48 pm
Sibril  

Flipping through Watership down yesterday got me this quote:

He said, 'Dance for me' and he said
'You are too beautiful for the wind
To pick at, or the sun to burn.' He said
'I'm a poor tattered thing, but not unkind
To the sad dancer and the dancing dead.'

-- Four Postures of Death, Sidney Keys

Wrote a scribble to go with it. Probably in the same sort of mini-world as this was.


Sadly, I can't find any of Keyes' work at the library, and I'd have to order it to get it from Chapters. Oh well. At least I have Strunk's Elements of Style and his not-so-subtle implication that anyone who doesn't know that inflammable means combustible is either a child or an illiterate.
 
 
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Green Bird
03 January 2007 @ 01:42 pm
Masterlist  

As suggested by [info]l_clausewitz, a masterlist of my projects. World, titles and oft-mentioned characters, along with the tag abbreviation. Not that many at the moment, but it'll be updated every so often.

1) The Wilds (tags: cotw, awe)
The Children of the Wilds: A rather rambly story that started as a worldbuilding project. Tamen is fairly sure that he's the prince of Gosli, and intends to reclaim his throne. Leil is fairly sure that he's the prince, or he would be if he were anything near sane. Elsed's one of the Lone Guard, the oft reviled remanents of the oldest empire, and has every intention of keeping those he serves safe. And Alida just wishes that she could find somewhere warm to stay with some platinum. Two clips from Leil-the-Sane's pov are here.
At World's End: Not yet fully outlined. Ebrelle is tired of being dragged across the world in search of Greenfolk by a foolishly worded oath sworn by men and women long dead. So he finds World's End, a place where the Tyhrne never ruled and the Greenfolk have never settled, and begins to build a sanctuary for the Lone Guard. A pity that the only kind of peace that the Greenfolk intend for him is of the permanent sort. Set before cotw.
Also see the explanation of Alida's heritage in Into the Skies, Pech's little adventure, and the long-ish poem A Lord Burnt.

2) Aden (tag: mod)
Masters of Dawn: Tawnry Saberahst has served the Aberaed since she was twelve. Now, though, as a mother of three and a commandant in the Telwahren army, her world is about to change drastically: Briellan Aberaed has surrendered to the Awnasee empire. Upon Briellan's death, Allende Aberaed abdicates, leaving a twelve-year-old to keep the Awnasee from replacing the Aberaed rule with one of their own. Balancing her duties to family, country and Aberaeds will take more than a little finesse... and did she happen to mention that Terrevion and Karashdion, the Lords created to purge the world of threats to its balance, are awakening?
See the creation story here. Further notes to come.

3) Kelrig (tag: kelrig)
Kelrig: First chapter (friends-locked) here. Kelrig, a world where no one is entirely sure if they are dead, alive, or not yet born; where the only thing more numerous than the gods are the demigods; where the only thing, in fact, that is wholly certain is that the island of Isamine has the magic...

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Green Bird
28 December 2006 @ 11:31 pm
Water  
So, Christmas has come and gone, and I'm quite pleased, as I now have a cd player that works, a great deal of chocolate, a new notebook and The Decemberists' The Crane Wife. This lovely cd, available for the low low price of $20, features such tracks as O Valencia, The Crane Wife (parts one through 3) and Summersong. If I weren't already completely hooked on The Decemberists, I would be now.

I've finally remembered to pick up a copy of The Silmarillion. Movie-verse LotR kind of ruined the books for me; knowing how things will turn out is disappointing, though I did like Tom Bombadil and the corruption of the Shire. The Silmarillion is much more enjoyable because of that, not that I would have disliked it elsewise. There's this feel to Tolkein's writing, a sort of love and dedication to the world that can't help but come out in the writing, and that makes me like it all the more. No surprise that some people like his books so much.

A mini-story that might evolve into something bigger one day. Not sure which world of mine it fits into, though, or if its the forerunner of yet another.

Water )

Well, I finally finished the latest chapter of CotW on Tuesday. No real surprise that it took so long--I've started to dislike writing Tamen, thought I'm not sure why. However, I now have a name for the Swan Sister's servants: gefiedre, from the German feather. Leil chapter next, as narrated by Elsed.
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Green Bird
22 December 2006 @ 08:52 am
Last schoolday of the year!  
So, English and ToK have pretty much been cancelled for the day. My peers have decided that the optimal thing to do in this situation is to play music very, very loudly, which I might otherwise have agreed with, but for their choice in music. Snow Patrol comes on? Nope. Greenday? Nope. Red Hot Chili Peppers? Nope. Instead, they appear to prefer that odd sort of music that I call "poppity pop pop", which would likely fizz if you shook it hard enough. Worse than the poppity pop pop, however, is their irritating fondness for rap.

This is silly. It's taking sexism to an extreme, and hardly making the children any safer.

Arella is nearly finished, and should be posted by Christmas Eve. The next chapter of The Children of the Wilds will be posted on FP by tonight, although I'll post the Leil-segment here. It's a rather interesting one this time, and takes Dreaming-Leil from simply my little bit of fun to being a major plotpoint. Also, either The Tailor and the Faerie or The Silver Quen should be done by the end of the break.

I will have fun this break... :D
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Green Bird
19 December 2006 @ 04:01 pm
Raven clips  
So, while deciding what writing to work on over this winter break, I pulled up a document simply entitled "Scribbles". Throughout were scattered scenes that I'd intended to eventually work into The Ravens, and, if I remember what half of them were linked too, I probably will. 

For your perusal, then, a few clips that never made it into the FP version of The Ravens.

Snippet )

Enjoy!
 
 
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Green Bird
16 December 2006 @ 01:38 pm
General update  

Waterloo: Revisions going well. Not too much left to do but add a bit more analysis and reshuffle a few paragraphs. Should be done by tonight, which means that the mentor can read it over and make any last minute comments, which I can work in by Tuesday night. *sigh* I really should have done more work on this in the summer.

Volunteer hours: 50 should be covered by the bell choir--we presented at the LAC yesterday, to an audience of nearly 1200 which included my grandmother and the mayor. Something like 20 from running bingo on Saturdays, 20 from the Thirty Hour Famines, 10 from assorted work at the Open Door. I need more physical activities, though. I've only got 12 from last year's Relay for Life and maybe 8 from weight room.

Writing: Notes for the next chapter of CoTW complete. Typing will occur when Waterloo is done. Swan Sister's hunters, diranallae trees and an invasion. Much fun.

Summer: Going to be at MGS again, although two weeks in July/August will be spent in Peru! I'm going to be working at a conservation centre. More info can be found here, under Conservation in Peru. Should be fun.

Five school days left. Soon peace will be mine...

 
 
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Green Bird
28 November 2006 @ 04:06 pm
ADA script complete!  
I'm very proud. It's pretty long, and I don't usually do script format, but it's done and I think it's pretty good. Can't post it here, since IB's obsessive about making sure nothing's plagiarized, but I'd be happy to send it to anyone I know. Just leave a note or something.

Writing is picking up now that school is slowing down. I'm hoping to get a lot of work done on The Children of the Wilds this Christmas break, at least four chapters. After all, I won't have any major projects then. Just review for Chem.
 
 
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Green Bird
21 November 2006 @ 11:07 am
Slow writing month  

Seems like I've lost interest in everything I've been writing this month. Workload doesn't help, either, and the one ends up becoming an excuse to avoid the other.

Next chapter of CotW, which I will finish by Friday night, is an irritating one. I don't really want to write it, but it's a fairly important linking chapter, bringing Tamen from Westercross Greening to the border of Gosli. It's looking to be a short one, though, unless I start it at Gosli, which would drop the Swan Sister's hunters and a lot of stuff I want to bring back in later. Stupid pacing. Hard to believe this was supposed to be a worldbuilding exercise.

Any suggestions for regaining interest in a chapter/project?

Oh, yes. An agouti is an impressive little thing. I should bring some into Kelrig.

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